In 2006 I began to see that what I thought was love was in fact a codependent relationship... I also began to dream about what love "really" was all about.
Our World Of Love
we can make love then cuddle
we can dance… then snuggle…
in our own little worlds
we forget what made us one
and the simple joy of having fun
tender kisses in the park
doing more in the dark
laying our bodies on the grass
a little fear but clothes come off
caressing your body
so gentle… so soft…
the moonlight helps me see
the goddess laying next to me
a world that’s ours alone
inhaling the fresh air
feeling God’s loving stare
peaceful and not rushed
sensual excitement
with every movement… every touch
we became one that night
even in the darkness
we were covered in loving light
refreshed… relaxed… renewed…
our bodies glistened
laying side by side…
no shame in being vulnerable
no shame in being exposed
our bodies offer an aura
as we count the stars
off in the distance
the lights of the city
let us know this world is ours
throughout the night
we make love
as the sun comes up
we return to another world
clothes once again cover us
we leave holding hands
and we smile knowing
there is a world
waiting for us to return
Thoughts from Authors Den...
ReplyDeleteReviewed by Aleja Bennett 6/19/2006
VERY NICE GOOD WORD FLOW
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 6/16/2006
What a wonderful poem!
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 6/16/2006
A wonderful expression on the joy of love,
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/16/2006
Like Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden, Dave; don't you think? Thank you for sharing this loving offering. Love and peace to you,
Reviewed by George Jackson 6/15/2006
Hiya, Dave. Liked this a lot.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/15/2006
Sensual but more then that this poem expresses love of two people and the beauty of that love. Well done.